Caged Bird commentary, from chapter 18

I awarded 17 points to this commentary, which would put it in the "5" range.
This was one of the 10 commentaries the IBO requested to hear; they scored it higher than I did by a couple of points.
The specific scores I awarded were as follows:
A. 4 points
B. 5 points
C. 4 points
D. 4 points